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-rw-r--r--docs/forms.txt8
-rw-r--r--docs/sitemaps.txt19
-rw-r--r--docs/templates.txt18
-rw-r--r--docs/templates_python.txt2
-rw-r--r--docs/testing.txt2
5 files changed, 25 insertions, 24 deletions
diff --git a/docs/forms.txt b/docs/forms.txt
index 1c683c44f7..ff192a4717 100644
--- a/docs/forms.txt
+++ b/docs/forms.txt
@@ -611,13 +611,13 @@ fails. If no message is passed in, a default message is used.
string comparison here, you will need to write your own validator.
``NumberIsInRange``
- Takes two boundary number, ``lower`` and ``upper`` and checks that the
+ Takes two boundary numbers, ``lower`` and ``upper``, and checks that the
field is greater than ``lower`` (if given) and less than ``upper`` (if
given).
- Both checks are inclusive; that is, ``NumberIsInRange(10, 20)`` will allow
- values of both 10 and 20. This validator only checks numeric fields
- (i.e. floats and integer fields).
+ Both checks are inclusive. That is, ``NumberIsInRange(10, 20)`` will allow
+ values of both 10 and 20. This validator only checks numeric values
+ (e.g., float and integer values).
``IsAPowerOf``
Takes an integer argument and when called as a validator, checks that the
diff --git a/docs/sitemaps.txt b/docs/sitemaps.txt
index fec65572f2..7414567b16 100644
--- a/docs/sitemaps.txt
+++ b/docs/sitemaps.txt
@@ -5,9 +5,9 @@ The sitemap framework
**New in Django development version**.
Django comes with a high-level sitemap-generating framework that makes
-creating `Google Sitemap`_ XML files easy.
+creating sitemap_ XML files easy.
-.. _Google Sitemap: http://www.google.com/webmasters/sitemaps/docs/en/protocol.html
+.. _sitemap: http://www.sitemaps.org/
Overview
========
@@ -55,11 +55,12 @@ URLconf_:
This tells Django to build a sitemap when a client accesses ``/sitemap.xml``.
-The name of the sitemap file is not important, but the location is. Google will
-only index links in your sitemap for the current URL level and below. For
-instance, if ``sitemap.xml`` lives in your root directory, it may reference any
-URL in your site. However, if your sitemap lives at ``/content/sitemap.xml``,
-it may only reference URLs that begin with ``/content/``.
+The name of the sitemap file is not important, but the location is. Search
+engines will only index links in your sitemap for the current URL level and
+below. For instance, if ``sitemap.xml`` lives in your root directory, it may
+reference any URL in your site. However, if your sitemap lives at
+``/content/sitemap.xml``, it may only reference URLs that begin with
+``/content/``.
The sitemap view takes an extra, required argument: ``{'sitemaps': sitemaps}``.
``sitemaps`` should be a dictionary that maps a short section label (e.g.,
@@ -199,9 +200,9 @@ If it's an attribute, its value should be either a string or float representing
the priority of *every* object returned by ``items()``.
Example values for ``priority``: ``0.4``, ``1.0``. The default priority of a
-page is ``0.5``. See Google's documentation for more documentation.
+page is ``0.5``. See the `sitemaps.org documentation`_ for more.
-.. _Google's documentation: http://www.google.com/webmasters/sitemaps/docs/en/protocol.html
+.. _sitemaps.org documentation: http://www.sitemaps.org/protocol.html#prioritydef
Shortcuts
=========
diff --git a/docs/templates.txt b/docs/templates.txt
index cb06fa27d9..b4cc47b9f3 100644
--- a/docs/templates.txt
+++ b/docs/templates.txt
@@ -473,7 +473,7 @@ block are output::
In the above, if ``athlete_list`` is not empty, the number of athletes will be
displayed by the ``{{ athlete_list|length }}`` variable.
-As you can see, the ``if`` tag can take an option ``{% else %}`` clause that
+As you can see, the ``if`` tag can take an optional ``{% else %}`` clause that
will be displayed if the test fails.
``if`` tags may use ``and``, ``or`` or ``not`` to test a number of variables or
@@ -537,15 +537,15 @@ The 'ifchanged' block tag is used within a loop. It has two possible uses.
{% ifchanged %}<h3>{{ date|date:"F" }}</h3>{% endifchanged %}
<a href="{{ date|date:"M/d"|lower }}/">{{ date|date:"j" }}</a>
{% endfor %}
-
-2. If given a variable, check if that variable has changed. For example, the
- following shows the date every time it changes, but only shows the hour if both
- the hour and the date has changed::
-
+
+2. **New in Django development version.** If given a variable, check whether that
+ variable has changed. For example, the following shows the date every time it
+ changes, but only shows the hour if both the hour and the date has changed::
+
{% for date in days %}
- {% ifchanged date.date %} {{date.date}} {% endifchanged %}
+ {% ifchanged date.date %} {{ date.date }} {% endifchanged %}
{% ifchanged date.hour date.date %}
- {{date.hour}}
+ {{ date.hour }}
{% endifchanged %}
{% endfor %}
@@ -571,7 +571,7 @@ The arguments can be hard-coded strings, so the following is valid::
It is only possible to compare an argument to template variables or strings.
You cannot check for equality with Python objects such as ``True`` or
``False``. If you need to test if something is true or false, use the ``if``
-and ``ifnot`` tags instead.
+tag instead.
ifnotequal
~~~~~~~~~~
diff --git a/docs/templates_python.txt b/docs/templates_python.txt
index ae2582d7b8..7aeed935b9 100644
--- a/docs/templates_python.txt
+++ b/docs/templates_python.txt
@@ -321,7 +321,7 @@ Note::
def some_view(request):
# ...
- return render_to_response('my_template'html',
+ return render_to_response('my_template.html',
my_data_dictionary,
context_instance=RequestContext(request))
diff --git a/docs/testing.txt b/docs/testing.txt
index 19eef9f071..68eff07788 100644
--- a/docs/testing.txt
+++ b/docs/testing.txt
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ used to validate that code behaves as expected. When refactoring or
modifying code, tests serve as a guide to ensure that behavior hasn't
changed unexpectedly as a result of the refactor.
-Testing an web application is a complex task, as there are many
+Testing a web application is a complex task, as there are many
components of a web application that must be validated and tested. To
help you test your application, Django provides a test execution
framework, and range of utilities that can be used to stimulate and