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authorTobias Kunze <r@rixx.de>2019-06-17 16:54:55 +0200
committerMariusz Felisiak <felisiak.mariusz@gmail.com>2019-09-06 13:27:46 +0200
commit4a954cfd11a5d034491f87fcbc920eb97a302bb3 (patch)
tree1c92caae5d8a9b33c51ddd74b4b2061248f3915f /docs/topics/db/examples
parentaddabc492bdc0191ac95d59ec34b56b34086ebb9 (diff)
Fixed #30573 -- Rephrased documentation to avoid words that minimise the involved difficulty.
This patch does not remove all occurrences of the words in question. Rather, I went through all of the occurrences of the words listed below, and judged if they a) suggested the reader had some kind of knowledge/experience, and b) if they added anything of value (including tone of voice, etc). I left most of the words alone. I looked at the following words: - simply/simple - easy/easier/easiest - obvious - just - merely - straightforward - ridiculous Thanks to Carlton Gibson for guidance on how to approach this issue, and to Tim Bell for providing the idea. But the enormous lion's share of thanks go to Adam Johnson for his patient and helpful review.
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-rw-r--r--docs/topics/db/examples/one_to_one.txt6
1 files changed, 3 insertions, 3 deletions
diff --git a/docs/topics/db/examples/one_to_one.txt b/docs/topics/db/examples/one_to_one.txt
index 7588825a02..e400a9ff8a 100644
--- a/docs/topics/db/examples/one_to_one.txt
+++ b/docs/topics/db/examples/one_to_one.txt
@@ -102,9 +102,9 @@ raises ``ValueError``::
...
ValueError: save() prohibited to prevent data loss due to unsaved related object 'place'.
-Restaurant.objects.all() just returns the Restaurants, not the Places. Note
-that there are two restaurants - Ace Hardware the Restaurant was created in the
-call to r.place = p2::
+Restaurant.objects.all() returns the Restaurants, not the Places. Note that
+there are two restaurants - Ace Hardware the Restaurant was created in the call
+to r.place = p2::
>>> Restaurant.objects.all()
<QuerySet [<Restaurant: Demon Dogs the restaurant>, <Restaurant: Ace Hardware the restaurant>]>