From 333f88c7e9920063ec4584dec31f84436d28ae62 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Natalia <124304+nessita@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Thu, 27 Nov 2025 09:11:20 -0300
Subject: Reduced subjective tone and improved clarity in
 docs/howto/upgrade-version.txt.

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diff --git a/docs/howto/upgrade-version.txt b/docs/howto/upgrade-version.txt
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--- a/docs/howto/upgrade-version.txt
+++ b/docs/howto/upgrade-version.txt
@@ -2,15 +2,14 @@
 How to upgrade Django to a newer version
 ========================================
 
-While it can be a complex process at times, upgrading to the latest Django
-version has several benefits:
+Upgrading Django to the latest version offers several benefits:
 
-* New features and improvements are added.
+* New features and improvements become available.
 * Bugs are fixed.
-* Older version of Django will eventually no longer receive security updates.
+* Older versions of Django eventually stop receiving security updates
   (see :ref:`supported-versions-policy`).
-* Upgrading as each new Django release is available makes future upgrades less
-  painful by keeping your code base up to date.
+* Upgrading with each new release helps keep your code base current and makes
+  future upgrades smoother.
 
 Here are some things to consider to help make your upgrade process as smooth as
 possible.
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