From 4a954cfd11a5d034491f87fcbc920eb97a302bb3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tobias Kunze Date: Mon, 17 Jun 2019 16:54:55 +0200 Subject: Fixed #30573 -- Rephrased documentation to avoid words that minimise the involved difficulty. This patch does not remove all occurrences of the words in question. Rather, I went through all of the occurrences of the words listed below, and judged if they a) suggested the reader had some kind of knowledge/experience, and b) if they added anything of value (including tone of voice, etc). I left most of the words alone. I looked at the following words: - simply/simple - easy/easier/easiest - obvious - just - merely - straightforward - ridiculous Thanks to Carlton Gibson for guidance on how to approach this issue, and to Tim Bell for providing the idea. But the enormous lion's share of thanks go to Adam Johnson for his patient and helpful review. --- docs/intro/tutorial01.txt | 7 +++---- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) (limited to 'docs/intro/tutorial01.txt') diff --git a/docs/intro/tutorial01.txt b/docs/intro/tutorial01.txt index b3358de26b..2f4c59be18 100644 --- a/docs/intro/tutorial01.txt +++ b/docs/intro/tutorial01.txt @@ -90,9 +90,8 @@ Let's look at what :djadmin:`startproject` created:: These files are: -* The outer :file:`mysite/` root directory is just a container for your - project. Its name doesn't matter to Django; you can rename it to anything - you like. +* The outer :file:`mysite/` root directory is a container for your project. Its + name doesn't matter to Django; you can rename it to anything you like. * :file:`manage.py`: A command-line utility that lets you interact with this Django project in various ways. You can read all the details about @@ -207,7 +206,7 @@ rather than creating directories. What's the difference between a project and an app? An app is a Web application that does something -- e.g., a Weblog system, a database of - public records or a simple poll app. A project is a collection of + public records or a small poll app. A project is a collection of configuration and apps for a particular website. A project can contain multiple apps. An app can be in multiple projects. -- cgit v1.3