From 4a954cfd11a5d034491f87fcbc920eb97a302bb3 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tobias Kunze Date: Mon, 17 Jun 2019 16:54:55 +0200 Subject: Fixed #30573 -- Rephrased documentation to avoid words that minimise the involved difficulty. This patch does not remove all occurrences of the words in question. Rather, I went through all of the occurrences of the words listed below, and judged if they a) suggested the reader had some kind of knowledge/experience, and b) if they added anything of value (including tone of voice, etc). I left most of the words alone. I looked at the following words: - simply/simple - easy/easier/easiest - obvious - just - merely - straightforward - ridiculous Thanks to Carlton Gibson for guidance on how to approach this issue, and to Tim Bell for providing the idea. But the enormous lion's share of thanks go to Adam Johnson for his patient and helpful review. --- docs/internals/git.txt | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) (limited to 'docs/internals/git.txt') diff --git a/docs/internals/git.txt b/docs/internals/git.txt index 90ff3ff3c5..9782f59888 100644 --- a/docs/internals/git.txt +++ b/docs/internals/git.txt @@ -70,10 +70,10 @@ documentation, test suite, packaging scripts and other miscellaneous bits. Django's code will be present in your clone as a directory named ``django``. -To try out the in-development code with your own applications, simply place -the directory containing your clone on your Python import path. Then -``import`` statements which look for Django will find the ``django`` module -within your clone. +To try out the in-development code with your own applications, place the +directory containing your clone on your Python import path. Then ``import`` +statements which look for Django will find the ``django`` module within your +clone. If you're going to be working on Django's code (say, to fix a bug or develop a new feature), you can probably stop reading here and move -- cgit v1.3